
Awaken
2017 · 660m
Synopsis
Publisher's Summary Desil has spent his life training, but a promise to his mother has kept him from using his abilities for anything worthwhile. Now all he does is help his mother manage her tavern as his father rests in a grave. Desil knows there's at least one other mage somewhere in this territory who can do what he can; they share a connection through their magic, although they've never met. He stays up nights wondering what they might be able to accomplish together. When an opportunity to not only meet this mage but change the course of his future finally presents itself, Desil jumps at the chance. A great leader has disappeared, leaving clues that only Desil and this other mage can see. War is coming, and following the clues could mark Desil as a traitor, but he trained his whole life for something. If this isn't it, then what is? He might unearth a new power capable of ending war, or he might die trying. Either is better than doing nothing. ©2017 B. T. Narro (P)2017 Podium Publishing
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Our MC is refreshing in that even though he's only 18, this isn't a Coming of Age story. He's already confident, assertive, and strong, so he doesn't having any growing to do on his journey. But as a character, he come across as pretty two-dimensional. While I respect him, I don't have any fondness for him. My main complaint is the dumb plot. It basically consists of a girl rushing around to find her missing parents just so she can say good-bye and our MC wants to help her. They rush off into danger for no better reason than that. A minor complaint is the subplot with the MC's father. I knew where it would end up, because it's such a cliched story line.
way better than the prequel. It was cool to see that Mason wasn't all powerful just strong
the author could have killed off everyone and I wouldn't have really cared. did not explain magic system very well.
I truly enjoyed the story progression and the characters and thier development. Simon Vance never fails to deliver with his story telling skills. But.............. huge flaw for me ........... seems so obvious. A mage who can manipulate water.........and yet it never occurs to him to freeze the blood in the viens of his enemies....really?.........That's just piss poor story telling.